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"Dammit…Don't go…"

A plead.

I can't leave. I have nowhere to go.

"Please…"

Sobs. Dry, broken ones that shake his entire body.

"Feli…I'm so sorry…" A gasping breath. "I never…It was never supposed to go this far, this was never supposed to happen…"

I say nothing because I have nothing to say. All those people, dead…

"Feli!" A shout. He removes his hands from his face, and those steely cold blues are burning red now. "You have to believe me! I never wanted this…"

Those steely blues, looking up at me with a helplessness that terrifies me.

"I believe you," I say. But I don't know if I do.

A sort of strangled sound in the back of his throat. He pulls me down to him, and now we're together on our knees. With a gasp he buries his face into my shirt and his body begins convulsing again with a new round of lamentations. Half of me wants to comfort him, and half is repulsed. The hands clutching at my clothes are still stained crimson. Almost all of him is bathed in that hideous scarlet…it makes bile rise in the back of my throat…

"Feli…"

You're supposed to be stronger than me. You're supposed to be better than me.

"I didn't mean to…I didn't want to…"

But you can't bring them back, can you?
yeah, i promised no more short fics.

i lied.

this is tiny, just 10 kb, but i might continue it. i like to think about how germany must have felt after WWII, when he realized that millions people had died because of him. and i like to think about how italy would react to this new germany.

i haven't decided if this is gerita or not, but it could be :)
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Unbridled-Dolly Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015
Oh! This would make a really awesome fic if you decided to expand on it! But even if you don't, it's still awesome.:) (Smile) 
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northsaare Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much for making Italy lucid.
It's so well written.
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supergeek17 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I've always assumed that Germany was never aware of what was going on "at home" during WWII, so the after-the-fact knowledge would have been a devastating blow. This captures, in words, something I've never been able to verbalize-- the anguish and the hurt felt by Germany, and by Italy in response-- in such a short form, and I have to give you so much credit for that.
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Z0MGedELR1C Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I almost thought this was HetaOni :iconwahplz:
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ninjabunny1 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
nah, just wwii fic uwu
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IvanRussiaBraglinski Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
PLEASE GERITA!!! *hugs* pwetty pweaz?
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ninjabunny1 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012
ha. maybe :P
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IvanRussiaBraglinski Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
PPLLLEEEAASSSEEE!!!!
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Tribal-Girl Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012
So epically awesome...... I love it.
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ninjabunny1 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2012
thank you :D
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mymelo Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh my god... its ... Its beautiful... I.. this... it.... .......shit I'm crying...
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ninjabunny1 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012
wow, thank you! :)
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Steer-By-The-Stars Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh God all of my tears.
ALL OF THEM.
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sydney881 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Student Writer
Wow this was great! You should soooo continue this! :D
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ninjabunny1 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012
hm...maybe i will :)
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TheGoblinJester Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I know what we can do! First, we take them to the planet Smoo to hang out for a bit while we do the second thing. Second, we get an orbital friendship cannon. Third, we invite ALL the Hetalia characters to a big party, and we turn them into bunnies upon arrival! I don't know how that solves anything, but bunnies are cute.
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haiyuong Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
T^T I CAN BRING THEM BACK!! HE GAVE ME A MANGO!!
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ninjabunny1 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
....heehee
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haiyuong Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
awesome job btw!! <3
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